FT-OCT :: Final Round - Kat v Moon v Wryn P5

okay, first off: i don't know if it was intentional (it probably was) but the way moon's hands alternate in their slapping made me to such a giggle. i can just visualise it in animation (helped no doubt by the thing you made probably helped!). good subversive humour (in a sense!) even for such a lil thing

also that first panel has the cutest kat face yet, i think. i think it's the mouth that does it in particular. it's sorta rageful but impotent.

"i can't feel my body"  !!

and mahhh how wrenching is that kill. like, it has ultra potency cuz of the way it comes after the promise of a teaming up and then: SCHLORP! dead kat. we will never know what could have become of teem mat

excellent moon dialogue! v authentic! i really like playing with syntaxes and stuff in order to see if there are ways to bring certain parts of the sentence into greater emphasis - and to say things in such an order that they develop, like, dual-meanings and stuff so the care taken in this makes me really happy

as does that frame of wryn post-stab. the pointing one. i think she looks really cute :S

also, way to make use of everyone's input!! that's what this game's all about! it stitches this whole thing up nice and neat and tidily! gives what was said earlier a new lease of life! beautiful